Comments from youtube:
This comment suggests that people liked our choice of narrative, and found it amusing. This was also commented on by the user below.
However, this person has pointed out that there were some continuity mistakes in our production. The comment about shaky shots is probably a reference to the scene of the boy's realisation, where we purposefully used hand-held camera in order to create a sense of chaos to reflect his state of mind as he struggles to take in the situation.
This suggests that our use of fast cutting rhythm and handheld camera before the ending was effective in creating tension
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This individual thought that this shot was effective. We chose this angle because it included our red motif and it has a voyeuristic quality to it, as it gives the impression of someone being watched without realising it. This fits with the sinister side to the video, as the boy is being manipulated without realising, and the audience is made complicit in her plan
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They also liked this shot. This over-the-shoulder shot from the doll's point of view, which we used in connection with a corresponding shot from the boy's point of view, in order to link the them together
Comments from facebook:
Summary
Generally, we were praised for our editing and cutting rhythm. However, we learned from our feedback that some people found the narrative hard to understand initially, we suggests that our motif may not have come across as clearly as intended.
This suggests that our use of fast cutting rhythm and handheld camera before the ending was effective in creating tension
This individual thought that this shot was effective. We chose this angle because it included our red motif and it has a voyeuristic quality to it, as it gives the impression of someone being watched without realising it. This fits with the sinister side to the video, as the boy is being manipulated without realising, and the audience is made complicit in her plan
They also liked this shot. This over-the-shoulder shot from the doll's point of view, which we used in connection with a corresponding shot from the boy's point of view, in order to link the them together
Comments from facebook:
Summary
Generally, we were praised for our editing and cutting rhythm. However, we learned from our feedback that some people found the narrative hard to understand initially, we suggests that our motif may not have come across as clearly as intended.
